~negateven CRITICS BY =liquidkid1

I really like this shot ,thats why i want to give my opinion about that. its very Difficult for me to criticize about the Artworks... but i try to tell my personal idea .


The Strong Points of this shot:

At the first look ,When you look at this shot carefully you can see Different Shapes and forms there. The pose contains the very intense line from up to down of the figure. the figure is sitting with the pointed lines and intense angles.
Basically in the General Format these kind of shapes of the cursive Lines of the figure can show Stress,anxiety,Violence,Madness,And worriment. But here you can get some feeling about Sadness No Violence and can get the lonliness in Silence and without Madness.and its Becoz of the Skills of the artist to Mixing of environment Objects to the Figure.There is Subtle And Adorable Lighting and placing the objects on the shot.The Pyramid or Cone Hat or Mask of the Clown give us a special feeling with that Sharp white color in the Darkness to the top and middle of the image.

the very important thing is balance between the shape of the figure and his Mask and BAR or Counter on the left side in differet Circle shape.when all these Shapes and lights join together you find Solitude and lonliness in that.the Artist has many Skills to show this Concept by playing with light and dark ,and contrast between the objects and Surfaces in this image.


Somethings In My Idea :

im my idea i give a little more Space to 4 sides of this shot, i mean i need more space and environment to showing the Better meaning.and in another word i can say i need to take the figure in a little more distance. More Surface of the Ground,Wall and the counter of the left side. ( Maybe the Artist tried to show that with More Darkness and without distant and he made his own comosition ).

In my Idea maybe it would be Better if we have more light from Top of the Shot then we have some more strange Shadows and mybe it maks the figure in more intense Lonliness situation.

this picture is better without the white Border.without the white border it looks More Darker and can feel the More Emotion.

Totally this picture makes me involve by very Deep Sensibility.

He reminds me a man trying to make people happy but he never can be happy and free of Sadness.
Nobody can see his face even when he is acting Happy. it seems he is Always Sad.
He is always between the pollution of the world that he dosent like but he never can be out of that.
he is the Reason for Smile but he looks Crying all the time.
He looks violent in some way but he is full of purity.

Anyway this Picture became one of my Amazing Favorites in dA and im so glad to find that .
congrats to the Artist and i just wanted to say my personal opinion about the work that i like.


Omid.